What Is Writing Into the Dark?

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Flash Sale Reminder * The Bradbury Challenge Writers Reporting * What Is Writing Into the Dark? * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “The writing might be fine, good depth fine pacing and so on. But something about the story has no emotion, no reason for the reader to care. Clearly the topic is important to the writer, but the writer forgot about the reader. … if you are passionate about the story, your character is passionate, then chances are the reader will stick with you if you … Read more

Critical Mind

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Critical Mind * A Reminder * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “It’s no use going back to yesterday, because I was a different person then.” Lewis Carroll “It occur-ed to me that this CV [critical voice] is really a failure to have compassion on yourself, to cut yourself a little slack and give yourself a little grace.” GK in an email from last night “Have no fear of perfection—you’ll never reach it.” Salvador Dalí Critical Mind A few days ago I mentioned in a post that I … Read more

Another Great Comment

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * A New Story * Another Great Comment * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “First sentences are doors to worlds.” Ursula Le Guin “I would like to invite in a new New Year practice for my writing, and for yours: Let’s make the month of January our time to actively reflect on our writing goals and intentions.” Julie Christine Johnson in “Writing with Inentionality” Or, I dunno, how about you just write? “Amateurs sit and wait for inspiration, the rest of us just get up and go to … Read more

A Great Point, and Types of Fiction Writers

In today’s Journal * A Great Point * The Two Types of Fiction Writers * Of Interest * The Numbers A Great Point In a comment on yesterday’s post, Bob B wrote, quoting me, “Don’t make stuff up.” Then he wrote, “So, when into-the-dark writers say they sit in a room and make stuff up, what they really mean is they sit in a room and write down what their characters do? More writers, including DWS, should be more clear and say that, in my humble opinion.” I thought that was a great point. Here’s my response, much expanded for … Read more

When the Story Slows Down

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Welcome * When the Story Slows Down * I Talk to My Characters * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “Any real commitment to doing things different, whether adding new behaviors and subtracting old habits, requires a transformation of inner vision.” Matt Perryman in Meaningful Particularshttps://mattpmn.substack.com/ “Have no fear of perfection—you’ll never reach it.” Salvador Dalí Welcome Welcome to Max C and any other new readers or subscribers of the Journal. I hope you will find it useful. Get the Archives and other free downloads at the Journal … Read more

Critical Mind Emails, and Updates

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * Critical Mind Emails * Update on Blackwell Ops * Of Interest * The Numbers Quote of the Day “Have no fear of perfection—you’ll never reach it.” Salvador Dalí Critical Mind Emails First, read that quote of the day again. And again. Sear it into your brain pan. Now take a deep, calming breath and read this: From time to time, I receive emails asking questions about critical mind. The underlying question is ALWAYS how to stop it, or break it, or break away from it, or run it off. Also, in … Read more

Flash Sale (Redux) and The Writing

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Welcome * Flash Sale * The Value of Letting the Characters Tell the Story * The Writing * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “Censorship reflects a society’s lack of confidence in itself.” Potter Stewart “No matter where you turn, the myths are there. Whether in professional circles or in hobbyist ones.” Matthew Gordon Pettipas, talking about the prevalence of the myths even among fanfic writers My response: Yep. That’s the frustration I bear. You can talk ’til you’re blue in the face and offer a chain-breaking technique … Read more

Challenge, Inside No. 9, First Readers, and a Flash Sale

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Even If You Are Not an American Football Fan * Inside No. 9 * The Bradbury Challenge Writers Reporting * About First Readers * Flash Sale * The Writing * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “And the day came when the risk it took to remain tight inside the bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom.” Anaïs Nin “I don’t want to get to the end of my life and find that I have lived just the length of it. I want to … Read more

Why I Don’t Follow or Advance the Myths

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Thought of the Day * Reminder * Why I Don’t Follow or Advance the Myths * Around Three Decades Ago * Along Came A Spider * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “As long as a book would write itself, I was a faithful and interested amanuensis, and my industry did not flag; but the minute that the book tried to shift to my head… I put it away and dropped it out of my mind.” Mark Twain “Failure is not a sign of weakness. It is a … Read more

Characters, and Differentiating Them

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * One More Quick Note on Slowing Down * Characters, and Differentiating Them * A New Story * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “The way I see it, if you want the rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain.” Dolly Parton “Pacing is a complex issue with a lot of levels. I will stop reading at paragraphs that have five different thoughts in them and are huge just because the author can’t hit the return key.” Dean Wesley Smith (see Of Interest) One More Quick Note on … Read more