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In today’s Journal * Appendix A: Examples of Hooks * Of Interest * The Numbers Appendix A: Examples of Hooks Note for Journal readers: This is currently one of only three appendices in the older book, Writing the Character-Driven Story. This appendix harkens back to Chapter 5: Writing the Hook. You might want to re-read that chapter, then come back to this. This appendix won’t appear in Writing Character-Driven Fiction. Instead I’ll include a few hooks in the chapter on Writing Hooks. But for now, since I already said I’d share these with you, here you go: All of the … Read more

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * This Is Overdue * Chapter 9: Writing the Ending, Part 2 * Of Interest * The Numbers Quote of the Day “Excited for the plotting and outlining features? Can’t wait for collaboration with your co-authors, beta readers, and the rest of your author team?” from an email update from Atticus describing their new platform. I could only shiver. Well, and unsubscribe. Atticus will be of no use to me. Your results might differ. This Is Overdue BREATHE: Living with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease, written by my dear friend Kenneth Flowers, is … Read more

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * The Novel Wrapped * Chapter 9, Part 1: Writing the Ending * Of Interest * The Numbers The Novel Wrapped Blackwell Ops 20: Soleada Garcia: Into the Future wrapped (see Numbers below). As soon as the first reader returns his input to me, I will send it to all those who took advantage of the sale. I also probably will set aside writing fiction for a short while in order to finish Writing Character-Driven Fiction. I want to get it finished and out. Again, I will continue the sale on the … Read more

In today’s Journal * The Bradbury Challenge Writers Reporting * Chapter 8, Part 2: Writing High-Action Scenes * Update * Of Interest * The Numbers Thought of the Day Like you and everyone else, I have been absorbing Story and all its aspects from every direction since I was a young child. The difference in us as writers is only that I trust that. The Bradbury Challenge Writers Reporting During the past week, the following writers reported their progress: Short Fiction Balázs Jámbor “Ghosts and loves” 2800 Superhero fantasy George Kordonis “Eyes Like Blue Alabaster” 3216 Urban Fantasy Adam Kozak … Read more

In today’s Journal * Notes * Reminder * Chapter 8, Part 1: Writing the Scene * Of Interest * The Numbers Notes 1. A few days ago in my ‘spare time,’ I started compiling Writing Character-Driven Fiction in Word docs, and reality hit: It might be longer than the two months I planned before the whole thing is finished and out. I still have one chapter to finish writing (on Cliffhangers) as well as five new chapters (so far) to compile and write, and five new appendices to compile and write. I’m still writing fiction, of course, and that comes … Read more

In today’s Journal * A New Story * Chapter 7, Part 4: Using the Five Senses * Of Interest * The Numbers A New Story “The Cycle of Ramón,” the seventh story in an interconnected series of ten magic realism stories, went live yesterday on my Stanbrough Writes Substack. If you enjoy magic realism, you probably don’t want to miss this series of stories. Chapter 7, Part 4: Using the Five Senses When describing setting, most writers use only the sense of sight. They’re leaving a LOT of the story in their head. To make the setting (and the scene) … Read more

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * No Fiction Yesterday * Chapter 7, Part 3: Setting Matters * Of Interest * The Numbers Quote of the Day “When an idea occurs, write the opening. Right Now. If it doesn’t work, throw it out. Then, if you still like the idea, write the opening again. Caution: Don’t rewrite, and don’t try to remember what you wrote before. All of that is conscious-mind stuff. It will derail the story. • Write a new opening. Start fresh and just write whatever comes. Let the character lead you. • Remember, the characters, … Read more

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * No Fiction Yesterday * Chapter 7, Part 2: Writing Setting * Of Interest * The Numbers No Fiction Yesterday I didn’t write fiction yesterday. Too many other things going on. I hate when that happens. Chapter 7, Part 2: Writing Setting Notes on the Example Notice that in the example I focused-down on a some details (specifity matters) so the reader could see or feel them clearly: The stoop The specific detals in the otherwise vague description of the character (age, hair, suit, satchel) The temperature and air quality Thin clouds … Read more

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * Chapter 7, Part 1: Writing Setting * Of Interest * The Numbers Quote of the Day “Creative writing is about possibilities, not about restrictions and limitations.” Jane Friedman And then she immediately missed the point of her entire quote and talked about rewriting, etc. Chapter 7, Part 1: Writing Setting Note: If you’re confused because this isn’t Chapter 6, please read the Updates in yesterday’s post. So What Is the Setting? This will be a deep dive. And this entire chapter, like the entire book, applies to all genres across the … Read more

In today’s Journal * Correction * Chapter 5: Writing the Hook * Of Interest * The Numbers Correction This is what I meant to write toward the end of yesterday’s post. “It’s completely up to you. The story you write can have authenticity that you can see, hear, smell, touch and taste, or you can write one more bland, made-up, cookie-cutter story from your conscious, critical mind.” I sent a second, updated post, so if you got two, keep the second one. Update 1. First, the book you have been reading excerpts from in this series of posts is tentatively … Read more