Serialized Fiction, and Effective Dialect, Part 5

In Today’s Journal * On Serialized Fiction * A Book of One’s Own * For Anyone Who Missed It * Writing Effective Dialect, Part 5 * Of Interest * The Numbers On Serialized Fiction In Of Interest below, Vin Zandri talks about a new platform where you can serialize your fiction. I’ve always been interested in serializing my novels. If you are too, be sure to also check out this Laterpress article: The Complete Guide to Writing Serial Fiction In the article, the author explains serial fiction and also lists several platforms (but note that Kindle Vella is no longer … Read more

Writing Effective Dialect, Part 4

In Today’s Journal * Writing Effective Dialect, Part 4 * A Note from Dan Baldwin * Remember the Run With Harvey Challenge? * Of Interest * The Numbers Writing Effective Dialect, Part 4 Word Sequence and Misused Words Sometimes dialect (character voice) is conveyed through a stiff, clunky response (e.g., no contractions). Other times it’s conveyed using words in a different order than a native speaker would use. Juxtaposition matters. A close friend of mine who was born in Mexico and whose native language was Mexican Spanish had trouble with prepositions when he spoke in English. For example, if you … Read more

Bradbury, and a Special Guest Post

In Today’s Journal * The Bradbury Challenge * Report on a Ten-Day Challenge * Of Interest * The Numbers The Bradbury Challenge The whole point of the Challenge is to have fun and grow as a writer. There is no cost. The only requirement is to write at least one short story per week. Feel free to jump in at any time. During the past week, in addition to whatever other fiction they’re writing, the following writers reported these new stories: Balázs Jámbor “Guest pictures” 2000 General Fiction Balázs Jámbor “Dear shine of my eyes” 2200 Contemporary Balázs Jámbor “Asking … Read more

Writing Effective Dialect, Part 3

In Today’s Journal * Writing Effective Dialect, Part 3 * The Writing (Character Voice) * Of Interest * The Numbers Writing Effective Dialect, Part 3 I should have mentioned in the Introduction that I’m considering turning this series of posts into a nonfiction book titled Writing Effective Dialect. If I do that, I’ll expand and include the posts in this series. I’ll also include some information from my years-old and now-unpublished booklet titled “Writing Realistic Dialect.” So just a heads-up on that. I recommend you read Part 1 and Part 2 of this series before reading this one. You can find … Read more

Writing Effective Dialect, Part 2

In Today’s Journal * A New Short Story * Bradbury Reminder * Find & Replace * On Writing Dialect, Part 2 * Of Interest * The Numbers A New Short Story “Racing to the Corner” went live yesterday at 10 a.m. on my Stanbrough Writes Substack. Go check it out. It’s free. If you enjoy the story, please click Like. Comments are welcome too. Both help with my Substack algorithms. Then tell Everyone else. Bradbury Reminder Today is Saturday. Just a reminder to get your Bradbury Challenge story info in to me before the Journal goes live on Monday. Find … Read more

Writing Effective Dialect, Part 1

In Today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * On Writing Dialect, Part 1 * On Those Stupid Red Hyperlinks * Of Interest * The Numbers My Thought of the Day I woke up at 2:30 a.m., grinning ear to ear and fired up to race back to the Hovel so I could leap over the parapet and into the trenches of the novel with my friends. But owing to a burned-our lightbulb, then a shower, then answering emails and working on a new series for TNDJ, by the time I finally started cycling through what I wrote yesterday, it … Read more

A Couple of Slow Days

In Today’s Journal * A Couple of Slow Days * Of Interest * The Numbers A Couple of Slow Days of writing. And in TNDJ. Okay, one, I had nothing to talk about yesterday. Or at least nothing occurred to me. And nothing really today either, but I wanted to get the Of Interest stuff out to you today. Sometimes life intrudes and other things take priority over writing. On Tuesday, my handyman came by and finished installing 40 amps of electricity in the Hovel on two lines, each with 4 receptacles. This has been an ongoing process. I’m just glad … Read more

On Believing In Yourself

In Today’s Journal * On Believing In Yourself * Of Interest * The Numbers On Believing In Yourself I’m always going on about believing in yourself and saying things like “It really is that easy.” It IS that easy, but that isn’t to say you can blink your eyes and suddenly be there. Those of you who can make that leap of faith have probably already done so. You probably only need a little believe-in-yourself booster now and then to keep having fun. But for some, believing in yourself and your abilities is less a quick-blink destination and more a … Read more

Bradbury, and Cutting Tomatoes

In Today’s Journal * The Bradbury Challenge * Cutting Tomatoes * My Hungarian Friend * Just That Quickly * The Writing * Of Interest * The Numbers The Bradbury Challenge The whole point of the Challenge is to have fun and grow as a writer. There is no cost. The only requirement is to write at least one short story per week. Feel free to jump in at any time. During the past week, in addition to whatever other fiction they’re writing, the following writers reported these new stories: Balázs Jámbor “AI_WAR” 5000 general fiction Vanessa V. Kilmer “Frayed Ends” … Read more

On Taking Your Time

In Today’s Journal * On Taking Your Time * The Power of a Streak * Guest Posts Welcome * Dean Wesley Smith Writes * The Novel Wrapped * Last Day! * Of Interest * The Numbers On Taking Your Time Another Excellent Example A couple of days ago, “Before I Forget” went live on my Stanbrough Writes Substack. Go check it out. It’s free. And I got comments: James Ron commented, “Intense, Harvey. Enjoyed it a lot. It had me wondering why the ref and Tats didn’t stop the fight as injuries mounted. Had me thinking it was a hit … Read more