Time Travel in Fiction, Part One

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * In Memoriam * Time Travel in Fiction, Part One: Getting Into the Weeds * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “Everything is theoretically impossible until it is done.” Robert A. Heinlein “Even if it turns out that time travel is impossible, it is important that we understand why it is impossible.” Professor Stephen Hawking In Memoriam This edition of the Journal is dedicated to my writer friend Sam Turner, whose loving, lifelong partner and wife Phyllis passed away on Thanksgiving day. Time Travel in Fiction, Part One: Getting … Read more

Do Characters Actually Exist, and Time Travel for Writers

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Finished the Novel * An Excellent Question * Time Travel for Writers * Of Interest * The Numbers Quotes of the Day “Only human beings, in an effort to soothe their collective insecurity, is haughty enough to put forth the assertion that they are ‘better than’ instead of ‘different from’.” Yer Uncle Harv “Being equal does not equate to being the same. And being unequal does not render either side less important.” Same source Finished the Novel Well, the novel wrapped yesterday at 3:20 p.m. Also, the real title of the … Read more

The Essential Elements of a Story

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * Preamble * The Essential Elements of a Story * The Challenge is Still on * Of Interest * The Numbers Quote of the Day “More people would learn from their mistakes if they weren’t so busy denying them.” Harold J. Smith Preamble Even while posting less often to the Journal, I still visit certain sites each morning. I’m always looking for gems of new (to me) knowledge, but more and more often I’m finding bad or partial advice that, in my opinion, requires some clarification. That was the case this morning … Read more

Self-Published Book Awards and Best Seller Status

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards * Want to be a Best Seller? * A Reminder * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “the internet’s and high tech’s steep and brutal downsides—political polarization for profit, the knowing encouragement of internet addiction, the destruction of childhood, a nation that has grown shallower and less able to think….” Peggy Noonan in “Artificial Intelligence in the Garden of Eden” in The Wall Street Journal “Hubris is one of the great renewable resources.” P. J. O’Rourke Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards Yesterday my wife forwarded me … Read more

On Character and Setting

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * On Character and Setting * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “Too stupid for words and too dangerous and wow are you a lazy bastard if you can’t write your own fiction.” Dean Wesley Smith on whether to use AI-generated content in stories “PG contends that social problems are social problems, not word problems.” The Passive Guy On Character and Setting Awhile back I was talking with a writer about my nonfiction book, Writing the Character-Driven Story. He asked why I put such emphasis on character and setting. Aren’t the events … Read more

Pacing Again, and Setting

In today’s Journal * Quote of the Day * Pacing Again * Setting * Of Interest Quote of the Day “While there are some benefits to using AI art as an indie author, it’s essential to consider how ethical it is.” Miles Oliver at The Independent Publishing Magazine Pacing Again Yesterday I talked here a little about Pacing as I used it in my short story, “Keep Calm & Carry On.” I mentioned that one reader emailed to say, “I don’t think I breathed for two minutes.” Another reader left a comment on the story as it was presented on … Read more

My Best Advice for Fiction Writers: Part 2

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * One Subscriber * Another slightly shortened day * My Best Advice for Fiction Writers: Part 2 * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “I don’t know how you perceive my mission as a writer, but for me it is not a responsibility to reaffirm your concretized myths and provincial prejudices. It is not my job to lull you with a false sense of the rightness of the universe.” Harlan Ellison “This wonderful and terrible occupation of recreating the world in a different way, each time fresh and strange, is an act … Read more

The Journal: Reader Pet Peeves: Thin Stories

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Also from Kris Rusch * Topic: Reader Pet Peeves: Thin Stories * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “The hardest thing … are the writers whose work just stops. Not because Dean or I got tired of reading them or the writer veered into territory we weren’t interested in. But because something got in the way of the writing.” Kristine Kathryn Rusch (see “Of Interest”) “[Writers] who have long careers constantly work on their craft. They might be afraid — hell, they might be terrified — but they step beyond it.” … Read more

The Journal: How to Write Into the Dark

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Topic: How to Write Into the Dark * A Recommendation * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “My students and I are currently working on finding a concrete theory of time travel with multiple histories that is fully compatible with general relativity.” Barak Shoshany, Assistant Professor, Physics, Brock University “Courses in prosody, rhetoric and comparative philology would be required of all students, and every student would have to select three courses out of courses in mathematics, natural history, geology, meteorology, archaeology, mythology, liturgics, cooking.” W. H. Auden via The Passive Voice … Read more

The Journal: Truly Stupid Advice and “Deep POV”

In today’s Journal * Quotes of the Day * Altered Brain Chemistry * Truly Stupid Advice * Topic: Deep POV * Of Interest Quotes of the Day “[J]ournalists need to be overt and candid advocates for social justice, and it’s hard to do that under the constraints of objectivity.” Stanford journalism professor Ted Glasser (As a writer, I personally see censorship as a bad thing. Your opinion might vary.) Altered Brain Chemistry From a dear friend whom I believe would not mind me sharing: “By now, you’re probably aware that the one change in your life—giving up nicotine in all … Read more