In today’s Journal
* Quotes of the Day
* Shameless Self-Promotion
* A Quick Lesson on Spanish Name Pronunciation
* “The Old 710”
* The Myths, and What Gives?
* Of Interest
* The Numbers
Quotes of the Day
“The man who views the world at 50 the same as he did at 20 has wasted 30 years of his life.” Muhammad Ali
“The beautiful thing about learning is nobody can take it away from you.” BB King
“The island on which traditional publishers and their camp followers live provides a very warped view of the real book world. … Approximately one out of ten thousand ‘kids’ would choose a paperback instead of an ebook.” The Passive Guy
A day or two ago was the 7th anniversary of my stand-alone SF novel The Day the Earth Shuddered and Went Dark.
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“The Old 710”
That’s the title of my short story that went out to subscribers to the Stanbrough Writes substack yesterday. I always forget until it hits my inbox.
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The Myths, and What Gives?
The myths of fiction writing are so prevalent that the “open rate” among my subscribers is sometimes really low.
I can only assume new readers and new subscribers open the Journal, see information that doesn’t conform to the vast majority of how-to writing books, and split. Some probably break out into a cold sweat and shove their computer away as if it might be possessed by the devil or something. (grin) The myths are just that prevalent.
Instead of teaching the myths, I teach self-confidence, self-reliance, and adherence to Heinlein’s Rules. Stuff like that. See my Disclaimer at the end of this post.
You’re all familiar with the myths I’m talking about:
- you must know at all times what’s going to happen next (very unlike real life) so before you write a word of the story,
- you must outline (critical mind)
- you must write character sketches (critical mind)
- you must do some world-building (critical mind)
Then, when you finally actually write the thing (if you do, if you aren’t already bored with it because you already know how the story will end),
- you must revise
- you must consult others for their input (critique groups, etc.)
- you must rewrite X number of times
- you must polish (whatever that means)
All of that for one novel.
How long does that take? Not to mention with every revision and every rewrite, you’re taking the story further away from your unique, original voice and the story the characters actually lived.
I hasten to add, that’s fine. If that’s your process, good for you. But wow, do you ever need this Journal.
Still, without it you will learn the “secret” someday on your own.
Well, if you don’t give up writing fiction altogether and find something fun to do instead. Something that isn’t nearly as tedious and arduous and labor-intensive as most of the how-to books make writing fiction out to be.
But back to the Journal and the low open rate:
For just one example, even on Thursday’s post, with the (I thought) enticing title of “Practice Exercise” (Hey, that alone would have nailed me to the screen) “Keep Coming Back, and Thank You,” the open rate was only 39%. And that was only among those who viewed the post, which was only about 75% of my subscribers.
Now, I understand that many blogs on various topics have much lower open rates and that low rates are to be expected.
But I’m writing a dedicated blog aimed at a dedicated audience of folks who want to cut their learning curve while actively writing fiction.
And I’m passing along information on writing fiction that you literally cannot get nowhere else, at least regularly. So I’m a little stymied.
What gives? Any ideas?
- Is it the format?
- Something I should add?
- Something I should discontinue?
- Are the topics not up to snuff? (And what topics would you suggest?)
- Is the typical Journal post “too” something? Too long? Too short? Too personal? Too varied?
- Does it arrive too often?
I am also aware some of you only “catch up” on the Journal posts once a week or so. Realizing that is why I started slapping (I hope informative) titles on the Journal posts almost two years ago. (The first “titled” Journal entry posted on November 3, 2019.)
Having watched a lot of Vin Zandri’s YouTube channel segments, I know he talks about writing at times. And he and I write about the same way and discuss similar topics.
Vin also does a boilerplate marketing and promo bit for the first minute or two. And my buddy Dan Baldwin adds a little promo to the end of each of his weekly blogettes.
Given how seldom some open the Journal, that’s a good idea. So I will do a little of that beginning today in the Journal. (Thanks, Vin and Dan.) Probably right after the Quotes of the Day, so easy enough to skip over if you aren’t interested. Like my Numbers near the end.
Vin’s regular videos (not including the new format, in which he interviews real people about their job, life experiences, etc., which are very good by the way and I recommend subscribing), are about 10 to 15 minutes long.
I imagine it takes about that long to read a typical edition of the Journal.
And Dean Wesley Smith, as much as I admire the guy and appreciate all I learned from him in my early days as a fiction writer — FREE, by the way, just as I offer now in the Journal — Dean has gotten farther away from doling out free writing advice and spends most of his posts promoting himself, WMG Press, and his Kickstarter campaigns.
So again, any ideas on how I can improve the Journal?
You don’t have to leave a comment either here at the substack or at the Journal website unless doing that is more convenient for you. Feel free to email me directly at firstname.lastname@example.org with any concerns or recommendations.
I must be doing something wrong.
But you don’t even have to go out of your way to visit the Journal website each morning to see what’s new. The Journal is delivered directly into your inbox.
Okay, so I’ll kind’a sort’a hope to get a lot of comments or emails on this post. I want to make reading the Journal a good experience for you. Please be honest.
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See “Write Only for Yourself” at https://www.youtube[dot]com/live/b_Vh4tDJKQw.
See “Where Have All the YA Paperbacks Gone?” at https://www.thepassivevoice.com/where-have-all-the-ya-paperbacks-gone/.
The Journal……………………………… 1250
Writing of Blackwell Ops 10: Jeremy Stiles
The Way Things Go
Day 1…… 1635 words. To date…… 1635
Day 2…… 2464 words. To date…… 4099
Day 3…… 1615 words. To date…… 5714
Day 4…… 3808 words. To date…… 9522
Day 5…… 2057 words. To date…… 11579
Day 6…… 3563 words. To date…… 15142
Day 7…… 1881 words. To date…… 17023
Day 8…… 3047 words. To date…… 20070
Day 9…… 2588 words. To date…… 22658
Day 10…. 3572 words. To date……26230
Fiction for September…………………… 38212
Fiction for 2023………………………… 190521
Fiction since August 1………………… 100534
Nonfiction for September……………… 12860
Nonfiction for the year……………… 187330
Annual consumable words………… 377851
2023 Novels to Date……………………… 3
2023 Novellas to Date…………………… 0
2023 Short Stories to Date……………… 4
Novels (since Oct 19, 2014)…………… 74
Novellas (since Nov 1, 2015)…………… 9
Short stories (since Apr 15, 2014)… 232
Short story collections…………………… 31
Disclaimer: I am a prolific professional fiction writer. On this blog I teach Writing Into the Dark and adherence to Heinlein’s Rules. Unreasoning fear and the myths of writing will slow your progress as a writer or stop you cold. I will never teach the myths on this blog.