In today’s Journal
* Quotes of the Day
* Thoughts on Writing Fiction From Yer Uncle Harv
* Writing Through Pain
* Of Interest
* The Numbers
Quotes of the Day
“Don’t compromise yourself. You are all you’ve got.” Janis Joplin
“The free-lance writer is one who is paid per piece or per word or perhaps.” Robert Benchley
“I saw an interview with Sir Patrick Stewart who said he finally learned that the character to be played was already inside him. He noted that when he stepped out on the stage he hadn’t a clue as to what was about to happen, but that he trusted his subconscious and knew he’d give the right performance.” Dan Baldwin
“The task of a fiction writer is to immerse her readers into her story. And story is setting. Characters have to be somewhere while they are talking, thinking, and engaging in action.” C.S. Lakin (see “Of Interest”)
Thoughts on Writing Fiction From Yer Uncle Harv
Everyone who’s reading this edition of the Journal should get a cuppa, then relax and enjoy. Dawn Turner’s guest post on “Writing Through Pain” is excellent. And it’s beneficial whether you’re writing through pain or not.
Afterward, bookmark or otherwise spend time reading the items in the “Of Interest” section (or both). Everything listed in it today should be mandatory reading for fiction writers. You won’t regret it.
Welcome to Philip S (Big Philly) on his return and to any other new subscribers or readers of the Journal. I hope you will find it useful.
Philip was away from Substack for awhile kicking the body fluids out of the critical voice that was nagging him. (grin)
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Writing Through Pain
a guest post by Dawn M Turner
Note from Harvey: Although the post was fine as it was, I did reparagraph parts of it so it would present in more bite-sized pieces on the page. Here’s Dawn Turner.
I started having chronic health issues in my early twenties, and they’ve snowballed since then (I’ll be 54 in a few days). Rheumatism, migraines, fibromyalgia, and connective tissue disease are my worst offenders. Needless to say, I’ve done a lot of writing despite/through/with pain. How successfully largely depends on the type of pain and where it’s located.
If it’s in my head, it often muddies my thinking too much. I can usually ignore pain elsewhere in the body well enough, though, as long as it’s not so bad my brain obsesses on it. It can take a bit of time and deep breathing (into the belly, not the chest) to help me get there, but when I can, it allows me to forget the pain for a while.
If all else fails, I write about the pain itself. What it feels like. Where it is. How it hampers my movement, activity, ability to concentrate. How exhausting it is, and how THAT affects my life. What annoys or eases it?
To make it more fun than just listing symptoms or jotting notes, I give a character the same pain. Regardless of whether the cause/source is the same, I pour my symptoms into them.
- How do they react to it?
- Do they get as frustrated as I do?
- For the same or different reasons?
- Do they want to curl up under the bed and stay there until it passes?
- Power through it?
- Try to ignore it?
- Are they wanting to give up?
It turns into a great outlet as well as a fun writing exercise.
Or create a different writing challenge. Put yourself in the shoes of a character dealing with a loved one suffering with the symptoms you have.
- Are they annoyed at the inconvenience?
- Feeling helpless because they can’t fix the situation?
- Trying to find solutions?
- How do they deal with the affected character’s response to their attempts to help?
This is actually a great way to step outside the pain for a while but still use the outward way it manifests (limited mobility/activity, for example).
I’ve done this often over the years. Not just with pain. When I can’t sleep, I put myself into the head of a character with insomnia or, conversely, who is exhausted and falls asleep.
Have a head cold? Inflict a character with it and put into words the coughing, sneezing, runny nose mess.
Battling depression or anxiety? Write a character’s experience with it. Maybe even help them overcome it, whether through their thought processes or due to help from another character.
Suffering from a migraine? Have a character describe the knives plunging through their eyeballs with exposure to light, or how every sound feels like crushed glass grating on raw nerves.
Below is an example from when I had a head cold a while back. This is just the first few paragraphs of a larger scene that became a chapter, but it’ll give you an idea of what I’m talking about.
In my case, I ran out of Kleenex. Resorting to paper towels was NOT fun, but I decided not to wallow. I wrote this instead:
Is it truly possible for one person to feel so miserable and not die? I’m pretty sure I’m putting that to the test.
Macy blew her nose for the umpteen-millionth time, grimacing into the rough paper towel.
From now on, I keep a whole roomful of facial tissue, even if it busts my bank account to do it. At least a case of it, in every room, at all times.
If I have to go through it, I might as well make it useful. When I can find a way to smile about it, all the better. At least, that’s what I finally decided when I got really aggravated by pain one day and couldn’t sit at the computer. It basically becomes fodder for stories.
Thank you, Dawn.
Folks, Dawn also creates bead pattern designs. You can see those here.
Talk with you again soon.
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